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 Structure When you have finished the body of the letter (motivation - argumentation - extra assets), add an introduction and a conclusion. Avoid standard formulations.  Also add the necessary administrative elements (sender, recipient, etc. )  Style Reread your letter for style.   - Is it fluent, brief and to the point?
  - Is it positive and confident without being arrogant?
  - Is it personal without trying to be too original?
    Perspective  - Is your letter not too self-centred? 
  - Does it relate to the original ad?
  - Does your letter highlight what you might offer to an employer? 
    Adjust your letter if necessary.    
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